I Once Was Comments

good changes with time. keep it up

We all change hopefully for the better, life teaches us so much! Great rhythm and flow, Excellent write!

Great show of your transformation. I can relate with basically all of it. I especially liked the last stanza.

We should never burn with rage but always with love, for that is what the great Lord has given us. I can also relate to this poem and you take my breath away with your works. Keep on going...

aww that was super cute i like i like its wierd how even tho were so young we can still see changes in ourself

you know if i didnt have to write 20 words for this comment to go through, i would only write one beautiful.

pretty chill i must say that u are a true poet

Love this poem, especially the last two lines! :)

wow, this is amazing. i love your creative style of writing. keep writing, you rock at it.

Really good. It really shows how you are changing from being 'hard' to something moldable and loving.10++

you are changing into something very wonderful and lovable! ! ! i like that alot....+10 Evil Bunbun

and you are changing... and change is life and you are feeling... and feeling is life and you are expressing... and expressions are life! 10.. Ali