Friday, September 15, 2006

I Once Was In Love Comments

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I once was in love with you
Now I'm so very through
You said all those lies to me
I wish you could just see
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Annamaria Jara 15 September 2006

You will learn in life that love is not always truth and no pain there is so much more to it! Love is a sadistic euphoria! You should work harder in having more feeling and passion in writing; do not think of it as just another poem, but as a chance to express your innersoul with a Life Story! AJ

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Steve Hagget 15 September 2006

Good poem though, I can really feel the emotion, Steve

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