Friday, March 9, 2012

I Once Saw Death Comments

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I once saw death, on a mountain high,
Once in the desert down below.
I saw him coming in the changing sky,
As a monster wind did blow.
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Juan Olivarez
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Atasha Williams 01 March 2016

Deep words Juan. We all have to die one day

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Martin O'Neill 17 March 2012

Feelings of morbidity assail us all from time to time. That's why I try to act stupidly at least once a day. Sometimes I succeed even when I'm not trying!

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Eric Cockrell 13 March 2012

comes to us all in time... all the more reason to live!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 10 March 2012

Morbid but definitely cutting. It intensity and universal message effectively touches the reader's mind and leaves him thinking. This is a really good write!

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