I Often Wonder Comments

yes... a very nice poem..very meaningful..portrays a realistic peicture abt the pathetic state world has crumbled itself into...10+++

Moving composition 10+++

there's a good consistent theme in your poems...love it!

This is a very well-written and thoughtful work, Sandra. I especially like the final words 'providential denouement'! If I may make one suggestion. The narrator of the poem (persona) has an excellent vocabulary and grasp of the language. However, 'Nothing surprises me no more' clangs out of tune (unless that is what you had in mind) . Changing it to 'Nothing surprises me anymore' might correct that. :)

it is true they dwell on others story gossip and others life..........bitter is truth......you have written in a thught provoking way.........thank you for your kind sharing.

Lovely thoughtful write Sandra...the images are so strong from this one...Fi 10+++

Unabashed greed always has a fall Gandhi gave a clear clarion call It is the means that justify the end Mankinds fall is not far away friend CP

noble thoughts...you allow them drift nicely...10

Why do some people just not get that greed doesn't bring happiness. In this throw away society people want more and more. No wonder you wonder and I wish more people would. Excellent piece Sandra. 10/10

sandra..an excellent write...the sadness this brooding gives is immense..the wealth within every human is not even felt...they call it a fast world as if the days and nights have become shorter

sandra, in this globalized reality, , , , greed only wins..............

i couldn't agree more..u said it my friend..wonderful truly wonderful 10+++

You are right Sandra... it is! ! ! .... wonder and sometime rather bore wondering! 10.. Ali