Thursday, January 14, 2016

I Offer You My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Boy to Girl
I offer you my heart
Take care as if it's yours now
Remember I am a heartless creature
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nosheen Irfan 28 January 2016

Wow. That's a unique one. You have presented the concept of true love in a conversational style. Love is no trade...true. Refreshing to read.10

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 14 January 2016

beautifully written lines.....

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Abhilasha Bhatt 14 January 2016

Really an amazingly narrated beautiful poem...loved it...thanx for sharing :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016

For the sake of peace and love! Nice work.

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