Wednesday, August 23, 2017

I Offer You Flowers Of Wisdom Comments

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Isolated from the tempestuous sights,
By the fluorescent green still lakes,
A pilgrim bows to mystical Kailash.
He came here for a once-in-a-lifetime sojourn,
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Meaning, " Arise, awake, find out the great ones and learn of them; "… your protagonist is a true follower of the Upanishads message. Good poem. Top

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Part 2. Kathopanishad says, " uttiṣṭhata jāgrata prāpya varānnibodhata |" meaning, "

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In the unfathomable ocean of wisdom, the Guru still seeks. His unending search includes a search for a deserving disciple with whom, he would entrust his legacy. That is to say, while a student is in search of the right guru, the guru is on search of disciple too.

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Chinedu Dike 12 June 2022

The poem aptly portrays the guru's free flight of creativity in the serene beauty of transcendent world. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing this profound poem with us.

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Erfan K Wandoor 06 May 2020

Hi.. in your poems ideas and language flow smoothly

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 17 November 2017

it was excellent one

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 17 November 2017

He looks in scary caverns, in every ashram, In the wildest otherworldly fields.... i am unable to under this line.. can you explain

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 August 2017

Beautiful poetry about the devotee that seeks his guru in snow peaked mountains of Kailash. The poem has the spirituality of a seeker. He came from far and is unstoppable, A rain of ash, a fall of rocks Can't lessen his seek for a worthy Master in flesh and blood.... is very nice as the search ends with getting of wisdom.10+++

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Ayni Artistique 28 August 2017

Many thanks for reading! Wisdom is always here, because the Self / Consciousness disperses it with Grace and Love. Namaste!

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Bill Cantrell 23 August 2017

Good descriptive poetry

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 August 2017

Worn out, one lucky evening he lays down And meditates, Dissolving irreversibly into the Vacuum, The Guru available at any time. Now all the Flowers of Wisdom live In his pure smile. You have well expressed your quest for divine grace and the spiritual thirst within you. 10 for the poem shared. Subhas

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Ayni Artistique 24 August 2017

Thank you for your kind feedback! Divine Grace pulsates unceasingly through us all but most Beings are busy with the world of forms, unwilling to investigate where do those arise from. Rare are those which know the Immortal Essence. Aum Shanti!

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