You tore me apart.
broken, wounded, and alone;
I headed towards the sky.
The wind came before the sun.
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very nice poem.full of complex imagery ''i mean it in a good way'' and words are well chosen
you, my dear, are a poet. truly enjoyed the plays on words and images.
Great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! so young but you sing like an enlightened person. CP