Friday, November 28, 2008

'I, ' No Longer... Comments

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You tore me apart.
broken, wounded, and alone;
I headed towards the sky.
The wind came before the sun.
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Brittney Karasek
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C. P. Sharma 29 December 2009

Great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! so young but you sing like an enlightened person. CP

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Blue Eyes 02 December 2008

very nice poem.full of complex imagery ''i mean it in a good way'' and words are well chosen

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Everest Fox 29 November 2008

you, my dear, are a poet. truly enjoyed the plays on words and images.

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Brittney Karasek

Brittney Karasek

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