You blinked your eyes
A tide of title is seen
Swaying away from me
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that`s the poem, light like a summer cloud and surely has its soul. thanks
well now u have a really good poem here.. outstanding job bravo
You wore a dress for me I could shape the poem’s body.......... nice write.......10
PERFECT POEM! ! ! ! ! I really love it, , , <3 well written.. good job..
You are really a poetic person.Excellant composition. Just write `on your suppressed lips'. thanks a lot dear HK
wow im spellbound -your poem has stolen my heart away it goes to my fav list. I loved it. Really no jokes. A+++and 10+++regards anju
A lovely composition, sir. Innovative. Loved reading it. Thank you.
Vini, vidi, vici... A nice job is done, beautiful composition, a lovely piece. My 10 for it.
Jo bhi likha hai, dil se jiya hai ye lamha filhaal jee lene de... Regds!
I want one poem on two birds