Saturday, October 25, 2008

I Never Wanted To Go Back Comments

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Can no one see me,
or do they just ignore my tears?
I cant go back to that one place.
I've been there before and never want to go back.
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Kim Fritz
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Dale Challen-Sual 31 May 2009

An amazing poem. Some one will come to fill up that hole again. Who knows, you may already know this person.

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Kesav Easwaran 13 December 2008

confessing words sad...but the poem reads good for its frank expressive style...he would come back again...well written piece, Kim...10

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Sad but true your heart seems broke but i love your writing you did a great job.. thanks for sharing.. Please take the time to view some of my poems thank you so much...especially check out my poem 'everyone turns away' i would love to see what you think on that thank you..

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