Friday, November 30, 2012

'I Never See What Has Been Done, I Only See What Remains To Be Done' Comments

Rating: 4.0

Time rushes us,
It deprives us from taking our time and letting things be,
We always feel like there's never enough time,
Always doing things simultaneously,
...
Read full text

Josh Ross
COMMENTS
Karoliena Somura 30 November 2012

I love your word choices in this poem like illuminates, bliss, simultaniously, all sends a great messege. Awesome job!

1 0 Reply
Josh Ross

Josh Ross

Yokosuka, Japan
Close
Error Success