Monday, June 29, 2009

I Never Meant To Leave Comments

Rating: 4.5

I see the tears in your eyes
As you sit in the the chair in the dark
Silent sighs as you sip your tea
Old lifes journey you start to embark
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jason mcgookin
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Tracey Wynn 08 July 2009

wow this is so different then what I read and I like it. I wasn't expecting death in this but you wrote this nicely.

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Danny H 06 July 2009

Extremely, ..............just, im beathless is was amazing, 10+++++++++++++++

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Soo oh so awesome! It left me breahless. it's deep and yet you feel the pain as you read..GREAT ~iZZZZZZZY~

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Lady Grace 29 June 2009

this is great..so nice to read, tho like mine, it has a touch of sadness...thats is an art.it is very beautiful..grace

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Megan Morquecho 29 June 2009

wow... it left me spechless good job

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Sebrina Wade 29 June 2009

Jason, I LOVE THIS POEM, it is so beautiful i almost cried

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