I thought the world would be no more
I felt the night would never be white
I thought I was driving ashore
I was drenched by a river of thought
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Great poem. I feel you. With the opposite you have to persist.
Your poem is very inspiring, never to get devastated when rejected, and patiently wait for a better course, devised by God Almighty. 'I thought I was her yours truly But I was sadly her full stop' - ha ha ha, after a full stop, a new paragraph may begin!
Ahsan’s comment is somehow inspiring and full of hope...🥰🥰