Thursday, September 5, 2013

I Never Found The One Comments

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Today, I bought my favorite wine
And a red rose with a long stem;
Watching the young girls passing by,
I recall when I was one of them
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Lora Colon
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Sandra Feldman 14 September 2013

Life is sad, life is lonely What we do or could have had Does not depend on us only. So many mistakes we make And when we realize, it's too late. I think you tried to express this in a very wonderful way

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John Brown 09 September 2013

Nice poem Lora, though I hope, not based on actual experience.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 06 September 2013

sipping wine with a self-gotten red rose in the Valley of Remorse! you weave there a true spell, Lora.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 September 2013

Oh i can so relate to dis fantastic poem pennd so finely in rhymin too. When suitors r plenty we turn them down and then end up choosin unwisely. Kudos. I hope u read my poem too, even d latest.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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