Sunday, October 7, 2012

I Neither Love You Comments

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I neither love you,
nor hate you....
can't stay, can't leave.
I'm in great fever-
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Neela Nath Das
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Babatunde Aremu 09 October 2012

Very emotional. I like the flow of the lines. Good write

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2012

dashing against reef, but, I am not a river. Wonderful lines-they go deep in the mind of the reader

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