Thursday, March 27, 2014

I Need You Now Comments

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Yes I need you to be by my side
And hold me to set me right.

I’m sliding fast to a dark hole down-
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Amitava Sur
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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2014

Read this nice poem of yours. 'Yes I need you to be by my side And hold me to set me right.' - The poem begins with this yearning of a distraught mind to be held by some one, this really touched me.

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Noreen Carden 29 March 2014

There is such fear and helplessness in this poem it breaks the heart with its rawness great great poem

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Roseann Shawiak 27 March 2014

Beautiful plea for help through the grief, Amitava. Heartfelt and frightened at the same time. 'Yes, I need you to be by my side and hold me to set me right'. Whatever I can do, Amitava, I will BE here for you. I will keep the light shining in poetry to help you find your way out.

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