Friday, March 2, 2012

I Need You Here Comments

Rating: 4.7

I feel so empty inside.
My heart has been torn out!
I hear your voice all of the time.
Every voice is filling me with doubt.
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Chelsea Behunin
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Bharat Liberty 21 October 2014

hi i love this............................................................

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L.p Omar 30 September 2013

nice poem......... similar with my thought.....

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Jinal Oswal 18 April 2012

A very beautiful flow of emotions... feelings... wonderfully expressed... Ok, what I think is this happens with everyone.. and don't worry everything happens for some good.. After a rainy day there is a day when the sun shines bright... And may be you are lucky to witness a rainbow, you never know... Take care.. Keep writing! !

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Neela Nath Das 26 March 2012

Your poem has again proved the very words ____ poetry is spontaneous overflow of emotion recollected in tranquility.

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Deaire Taylor 26 March 2012

This reminds me of something that I had a few years ago. Thanks. Keep it upn ^_^

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Clinton Ekeh 16 March 2012

You need him where you are Buh he can't be there however Cos wishes unlike horses Sometimes chooses Whom to hear And for your dispair Just hold on It won't be long Before comes the sun To you a nu dawn

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Rhiscx The Final Burden 16 March 2012

Pain brings the greatest of power.

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(De Va) 08 March 2012

Someone once said that it is not love that hurts, but unrequited love that hurts...blessings.

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Neko Girl 06 March 2012

im srry about tht...............

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thank you so much! it's totally true too about love and pain. im going through something that i didn't expect to go through and im not handling it very well

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Neko Girl 02 March 2012

aw so cute it tells of love and pain

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Chelsea Behunin

Chelsea Behunin

Provo, Utah
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