Wednesday, January 2, 2008

I Need You And You Are Not Here Comments

Rating: 5.0

I need you but you are not here.
The world is crashing around me and I am filled with fear.
I lost my faith but I held on tight.
It has been ripped from my hands.
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Shane Clift
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wow shane. this is an excellent poem, truly emotional and great descriptions of them. always keep in mind though, 'Loved and won is the best, Loved and lost, second best.' great job

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angelianne 1012 09 June 2008

another well written piece...thanks for sharing..keep it up... another 10/10 for u...

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Susan Mcgraw 06 March 2008

so full of desire for a special someone

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Shiza Khan 02 January 2008

nice poem...full of emotions..it reflects an urge for tht sumone special to b near.

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Shane Clift

Shane Clift

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