Friday, December 12, 2008

I Need You Comments

Rating: 4.8

Truths and lies have now made me numb,
Even tears of mine do not know why they rain.

The truth hits me as it comes,
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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*Smile4ever* 07 May 2009

Yr words have a silent depth which silently touches the heart especiall the end is so nice.. Keep it up n thanx for sharing yr thoughts.. *smile4ever*

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Ency Bearis 13 December 2008

everybody need somebody...thats an instinct we need in our life..nice touching poem..greatly penned..10 Ency Bearis

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 December 2008

' When I needed you most, your not there '.My heart trembles, I almost collapse.Heart crunching poem! Nice writes Mehreen.

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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