I Need To Get Away Comments

the sense, the sense is admirable, strong passion is there, which makes the reader careless about the arrhythmic format

My life exactly. Its scary to see my own life written by someone I have never even met! Even sleep never seems to kill the pain. I hope your pain is over by now.

Somehow, most members here in PH have one thing in common: PASSION! Through poetry, we obtain a leeway to express our sentiments be it good or bad. It helps us ease the pain, boredom, love, and even hate! Let us absorb it and face the problems suarely, don't get away from it or it will run after you for life. This poem have passion, top marks.