Wednesday, December 16, 2020

I Need To Be A Christmas Octopus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh dear God Almighty!
Please help or pity me.
With my present wrapping,
A chore I cannot flee.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 16 December 2020

Nice one Shaun...l really like the reference to the Christmas Octopus...yes wrapping all those presents can be rather tricky. The quintessentially British ending is delightful. Consequently, it's certainly a frantic, but fun filled, festive five from me.

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Leeann Azzopardi 16 December 2020

Shaun, don't you have gift bags in England? I really love this poem. I remember me wrapping presents when I was young. I had the same problem. Bravo!

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Kostas Lagos 16 December 2020

Take a deep breath and get back to work! Beautiful poem

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