Friday, December 30, 2011

I Need To Comments

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I need to speak
To give power to the weak
So they could realize their own strengths
Of laying a brick,
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Thando Mashinini
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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 12 February 2012

it`s really great poem with strong massage...i love it I need to speak for the weak, I need to see to lay a brick, I need to dream to turn keys, I need to feel good to release! wow... i think you described all poets soul. Wonderful words...

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Young Church Poetry 08 February 2012

Great poem with a great message, its a challenge for us as poets to change lives. Your poem is very inspirational, excellent work.

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Ramesh Rai 03 February 2012

need to speak To give power to the weak So they could realize their own strengths Of laying a brick, nice job great write.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 05 January 2012

So i could pass the message to the people's players! .....this is marvelous man..big up to you.

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Binish Cd 05 January 2012

let the message in this poem helps the weak to rise and fight for their rights.........

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