i was born
of the wind and rain,
conceived by storm,
nursed by its path.
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This write is very soulful... Extremely spiritual and as I went down reading it... I was touch by the good insight of each line... Now the lines were short! And Straight! To the point... Which made it easy to grasp and digest the whole poem, Wonderful Sir Eric... The_African_Son
Wonderfully, Erik... 10......... Especially I liked for you've such great force and can pray like thunder and born of the wind and rain Unfortunately I grieve until then that I can't to be a rain.. :)
This is a wonderful poem. Existance very poetically expressed. I dance in the smallness of the timy bud Superb poetry, Eric.
HMmmmmmmmmmmm i kinda love this feeling, calming and peaceful....what a green touch! _Unwritten Soul