Wednesday, May 30, 2007

I Need Hope Comments

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On the rugged paths
Of my silent life
Strange roads and intimidating sights
Vaccum air i tried to breathe
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Trevor Schulte 01 June 2007

I do hope you find your hope but maybe you should be looking up at the Hope that is everywhere, even inside us!

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Raveendran . 30 May 2007

It is a beautiful poem. Bring out some optimistic lines as well.

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