I Need A Smoke. Comments

You have a way with your words.and you have a way with showing your emotions and writing them.I can TOTALLY relate to what you were feeling. great job

a blast of emotion. wise choice of words. i feel it. very nice.

full of angst. you describe things well and I can almost feel what you're feeling. well done!

very great poem, i love it, all you need to work on is spelling errors and seperating each line with a space.

dang! ! ! but i know how that feels. that was beoned words

Tyler, light up and lighten up, for Christ's sake and your own bleeding sake!