I used to have a happy life
But I seem to be missing something in my life
I feel so empy inside, without you
I don't even feel like me
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I love this poem. It's so true. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) Never stop! ! ! ! PLZ NEVER STOP WRITING! ! !
i love this...i can relate to this poem in many ways...wonderul colors of love showing through...and a sadness like dark spots around the precious edges of what you hold dear...keep writing^^ it was a joy to read this one: p
very personal and raw. your projections on this poem are quite clear. as for your style, you seem to add a spice of order into your apparent chaotic writing. Well done =D
very well done poem very nice very emotional good job :)
i <3 it! ! ! \^-^/ the way u wrote this had a flow that was sooo smoothe.... and it looks like it could be a saong :) 2300++
I love it. I can relate to everyting. Good job