I Need A Chance.... Comments

wow it's a really nice poem..well done :)

this real good

I really like your poem.....its exprssional: p

wings of fire and wish to cherish and she wish to live like a bird..in this sky to... I wish to live in the stars, Might please me living so far. My presence would brightup them,

nice poem if wishes were horses then all could ride

Beautiful flight of fancy. CP

Nice little poem. I hope you will avail the chance. The world and the life is full of chances. I hope you will explore it to the best of your abilities. Best Wishes Naseer

beautiful, thanks for sharing

A universal piece, with message many will relate to, well penned

Your poem is full of innocence and is delightful in content and perception. Only thing, you need to leave out common told words to give your poem better effect. Nice thoughts..........keep writing..............arya with blessings.

Thats truth my freind. We all need a chance to revial the potential we got inside.. Their is no revolution anymore: so this poem could have a mass effect.

That is nice and theirs always chances in life just have to learn which one is the right one good work i like it

gud one.. we all need a chance.. and wen we get a chance we shdnt leave tht chance.. howeva.. life is to explore.. search new hopes! so letz make d life wid all our chance.. lovely peom.. really touchd ma heart..! ! but there is a mistake in 3rd line.. wud u pls correct it.. tc! !

Don't we all need chances? It's great and puts it in a way that makes sense.

It is very enchanting this grasp of yours to reach the edge night sky so high sweet is song when sung at night stars sigh..iip