Monday, June 13, 2011

I Need Comments

Rating: 5.0

1. I need to tell you a secret look at 5
2. The answer is loo at 11
3. Don`t get mad look at 15
4. Calm down don`t be mad look at 13
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Dickens Joseph Sawo
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 June 2011

Nice poem. Quite innovative. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I give it 8/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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