Thursday, August 20, 2015

I Must Take You Comments

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I confide!
With full heart i gave you...
Your truthful looking eyes seems so true,
Your bright masking is as sky blue.
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janice jolan
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Kim Barney 07 September 2015

Nice poem and very lovely picture.

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Rajnish Manga 20 August 2015

It is the presence of love that gives you the ability to understand your nears and dears. You harbor no ill will even if you find something is amiss in their interactions. I love the poem. You are dear to me, I can always forgive.

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Cherret Leakey 20 August 2015

well, the lines got twisted somewhere. i got lost towards the end. but that doesnt mean it is not a good poem.

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