I Must Of Deserved It Comments

Beautifully crafted. From asking to confirmation. Clever.Thank you so much dear Jennifer.

Thought provoking and raw. 10+++

a " break up" can be a " headache" as well, but perhaps you meant " heartache" ? ? i get the picture. :) bri

My heart was bursting with enough love for a universe/Now it's a black hole a void/A beautiful flower without water wilted and died.....I greatly admire the intensity of poetic expression! A beautiful poem my friend....10

A very touching poem. A vivid depiction of sorrow and pain caused by break up. A well crafted write with superb imagery. May you find solace in Poetry, Jennifer.

Wilted and died! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

My mouth once kissed delicately! ! ! ! ! Break up. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A fellow poetess was in dire pains when she wrote this piece. The thought pangs me. 'A beautiful flower without water wilted and died Yes I deserved it' - no flower deserves to die without water. I fully agree with poetess Lyn Paul that 'No one deserves it'!

No one deserves it! Your words I read with sadness and also some experience yet different scenarios through life. May your sun shine.

Your poems speak of deep hurt dear Poetess. May you find inner healing through our loving Father.

My body was held so tightly and caressed so gently Is now scarred and damaged My heart was bursting with enough love for a universe Now it's a black hole a void..a break up can be destuctive in the emotional, physical and psyhological level....... you have expressed it all so wonderfully well in this poem. thanku dear poetess for this poem. tony

A good start with a nice poem, Jennifer Birchall. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Well thought-out and nicely brought forth from the heart. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Jennifer.

A truly brilliant write, great flow and use of emotion and imagery