Monday, January 5, 2009

I Must Leave You Comments

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IT HAS BEGUN
I MUST LEAVE YOU
AT THE DEPOT
DAWN WILL BREAK
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CAROL HUGHES
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Meggie Gultiano 17 January 2009

I'LL BE HERE IN YOUR DREAMS NEVER FORGET ME GOOD MEMORIES SHALL ABOUND ..I love these three lines, Carol..so sweet, so lovely words to be kept in my memories forever..I love the flow of your words..serene, inside joy and peace.. thanks for sharing. Hugs, Meggie

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 January 2009

spontaneous and original! ! ! keep writing! ! !

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Memories are pictures that never grow old. Thanks for sharing.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 January 2009

The memories linger as long as you live and whats more the place you 're belonged to will keep on hauntin yer mind.If you could get back to the scenes with him would be better and kills off the hauntin.Great writes baby! ! brett

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Blue Eyes 07 January 2009

i like the poem it touches the feelings.

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C T Heart 05 January 2009

Such a beautiful and heartfelt composition though you have written it in all capital letters...I assume this piece goes to my bestfriend...smile beautiful memories stay in your heart to cherish.10+++

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CAROL HUGHES

CAROL HUGHES

NEW YORK CITY, N.Y.
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