Friday, June 26, 2009

I Must Have Swallowed The Key Comments

Rating: 4.3

Please do not come back
And say that you love me.
I'm the one that you lack
And your life's been so empty.
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Cynthia Buhain-baello
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James S Newcomb Lang 18 December 2009

I see this as the sadness of a lost love and the dilemma of possible reconciliation! Why be hurt twice?

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Kente Lucy 09 December 2009

Cynthia ur a poet, breif, straight to the point and interesting

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 04 July 2009

wow, one of your BEST poems; the situation is sad but your tone is NOT weak at all. I loved your words, metaphors and the last 2 lines are my favorite. Well expressed, well described and well written. Absolute simplicity of words and reactions accompanied with supreme complexity of feelings and attitude. Amazing

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ssss sxcxs 26 June 2009

Wow, amazing yet so sad and true. Keep doing what makes you feel good and makes you stronger.

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flariza bazu 26 June 2009

excellent please move on now next stop will be better

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Cynthia Buhain-baello

Cynthia Buhain-baello

Manila, Philippines
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