Friday, November 22, 2013

I Must Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

The time has come
I must go, I must go
Leaving this happy home
Breathing the memories of bliss
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Rekha Mandagere
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2014

A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Bernard Snyder 02 January 2014

Hopefully you enjoyed every moment while it lasted. Great write, my friend! I voted a 10+.

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Hans Vr 23 November 2013

The poem provokes feelings of sadness if we imagine one has to leave a state of such a huge bliss behind. Between the lines the reader feels the sorrow but also the gratefulness and thankfulness of the poet. Change in our life is quite a constant. Many of the things in our lives are transient, but this does not take away if the pain if we have to leave something very precious behind. I pray very much for your strength, Rekha, and if you truly cannot stay, I hope you can take much of the bliss with you. A ten for the poem

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