Wednesday, January 18, 2006

I Must Go Now Comments

Rating: 3.4

Sleep does not come in silent nights
while thoughts of my dear Fatherland
buzz through my mind like moth-kissed lights
as if my tears could understand
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Herbert Nehrlich
COMMENTS
Scarborough Gypsy 05 February 2006

Oh H, you are a clever old stick aren't you? I don't know how you do it. You just seem to real them off without any effort what so ever. I am very jealous! Gyp's

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 18 January 2006

Herbert this is beautiful! The feel behind it is so genuine and heartfelt...you almost made me cry as I read it. Absolutely wonderful!

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Raynette Eitel 18 January 2006

Herbert, in my opinion this is the kind of poem you were born to write. It is lovely, true to the emotion and gentle. Beautiful job, my friend. Raynette

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Mary Nagy 18 January 2006

I love your poems about your mother.........I agree, this is absolutely one of your best Herbert. Such tenderness shows through when you mention her....I love it. Sincerely, Mary

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Rich Hanson 18 January 2006

This is one of your best efforts. A gentle, moving poem, and the rhymes work. They don't come across as forced or intrusive. Well done.

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Solomon Brook 18 January 2006

You have a way with words (as if, right? Poet) there my good man. I enjoyed the clear expressions and artfully contrived lines. Its a unique piece. Keep up the wonderful contributions of skill.

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Sandra Osborne 18 January 2006

Actually... Damn, Damn, Damn, Damn good. Speachless and impressed - CS

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