Great poem Dominic, short and sweet but in those lines it is cleverly written and presented more than well with a message to really hit.
I think your term of phrase and opening line is simply sublime and rapidly sets the stage, for what is to follow and so cleverly delivered.
I'll be honest and say I would never of thought of it. Superb!
Five worthy golden stars my friend and remain poetry blessed.
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
Great poem Dominic, short and sweet but in those lines it is cleverly written and presented more than well with a message to really hit. I think your term of phrase and opening line is simply sublime and rapidly sets the stage, for what is to follow and so cleverly delivered. I'll be honest and say I would never of thought of it. Superb! Five worthy golden stars my friend and remain poetry blessed.