Saturday, March 22, 2014

I Must Confess Comments

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why dont you see/ you still have a hold on me
i must confess /idont love you any less

you come around my place
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jayne harris
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Bri Edwards 24 March 2018

favorite lines: you ought to be dead meat but your not worth a charge sheet............nice. and i like your refrain(s) . i tried, unsuccessfully to resist clicking on you from the 'online members list'; your photo was just too irresistible; i suppose it is someone else? ! anyway, i'm sure this will be/is a popular song if it is heard. it has quite a few 'typos', but the listeners won't 'hear' them. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

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Gajanan Mishra 22 March 2014

getting on with life, fine writing, thanks.

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