~ I Ms. Nivedita: That Rookie ~ Comments

A beatiful writings, Lovely.........................

You have talent real stardom and your poems never cause any boredom to any careful reader

Such an interesting poem nivedita.

Sartarical about stardom.

I like the flow of this poem, carries you along with it, beatiful!

Nice Job, And Good Rhyme In The First part. Keep Up The Good Work! ..

Reminds me very much of Erich Fromm 'To be or To have'. What's rookie?

Wonderful poem, well expressed ideas..Great work...Thank you for sharing

A different thought and very different write........ The inner stroke is beautifullllllllll............

self assessment..well done..its really a good poem with professional way witten..liked it alot..lovely one

It got me into a feel of being trapped in bottlenecks - in a sacristy and at the same time touched 'me chord' with youthful vigor - eloquence - unharnessed passion forcefully bound within frame.

A 10++ To come out out in the open For more And let it be crass, Yet this schism Reaps silence as never before

Dear Nivedita, What you've written here is complete defiance! Good luck, keep posting. Thanks for sharing such a daring candor of your 'mind-dom'! Regards, Sayantan

calling bedroom boredom? a rookie? its complicated and interesting n shws just to what lengths a human brain can think....

Niv: Tlhis is a very tantalizing poem written with much authority. I don't see the rookie. Very good Poem. Your friend Lynn

as an english teacher, your poetry always intrigues me...of your profession...

Hi Niv, i enjoyed this poem, its open and expressive. this is a very bold poem., and writing it is taking a bold step. thanks for sharing.

The soul is wrapped in body.The poetess clearly feels this.Thousands are the barrier there, to over come.But the soul itself is ever free. An ordinary pen does not write this poem.Bravo Nivedita!

A daring, bold expression of a rookie... Fixed fasiondom liberty is rookie's boredom therefore weedom: cloak off stardom and cloakdom...a rookie, poem says....confidence, i say. Good job Niv and a 10

hi niv, trhis is a fantastic write.confidence galore.your words are tough though.thanx for sharing. voted10 surya