I Move Through Your Eyes Comments

There is not much more I can add to Patricia's assessment of this, most beautifully conceived piece of romantic muse...the repeating first line, is simply mesmerising, fine title too, it captures from the reader, the poem, leaves us in awe. Well done...wow! only 18. Keep it up Lazarus Knix, you will go far. Smiling at you Tai

Oh my; I said I was going to bed, but then this got me so excited. Just by the title, I could tell it was fabulous and immaculate! Which it is..that title is like a spark of brilliance landing on the mind. (smile)