Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, December 16, 2013

I Move Comments

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I move around
As happiness is found
I have in you a good friend
Who will lead me to an end?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Lucette Bailliet and Rohani Daud like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Re: I move (Score: 1) by Dagger666 on Tuesday, December 17,2013 (23: 34: 58) moving with emotion..rock on

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Re: I move (Score: 1) by misdgal on Tuesday, December 17,2013 (01: 27: 49) Extreme raw thought and lovely tension. I like!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 December 2013

Re: I move (Score: 1) by misdgal on Tuesday, December 17,2013 (01: 27: 49) Extreme raw thought and lovely tension. I like!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

Good Poem Greg Rouse6 minutes ago this is a lot of metaphor in this one and it may cause you to think; the word choice is different and though I may not clearly see the meaning in each stanza I like the way it feels

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

great Juan Chavez2 minutes ago nice word play and i liked the rhyme this is my type of poem Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

Bill Hurley2 minutes ago very nice

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Gajanan Mishra 16 December 2013

manage with rising star, good thought, I like it sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

I move around As happiness is found

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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