Monday, February 27, 2012

I Mourn For You Comments

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You were but a foolish man when you were younger.
Given a warning that you did not heed.
You killed a man you didn't know.
And married a woman who would one day kill us all.
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Kelsea Osterman
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K Tyler King 14 March 2012

Very deep and in some places disturbing. I can sense a lot of pain in this...I am sorry for your loss too. God Bless you....and keep writing. It's very therapeutic.

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Emily Drexler 06 March 2012

it's a good poem but I'm some what lost in your theme..

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Matthew Broxton 02 March 2012

I love this poem, the way you communicate your emotions are very strong. I may not have felt your pain but your writing makes it difficult to ignore. Poetry's you're catharsis, keep going.

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Pheww! This poem touched me, it reAlly came to me and overwhelmed me with so much emotions, if I knew who would wipe away tears in my chick I would have cried long before I read the last line, being ofcoz one of your similar situation and having to mourn atleast my father too, but your situation is way sad that mine, ..... Am really lost of words to describe how I feel rightnow... Can you please talk to me on the Inbox I just want to know more about the motive behind this poem, I think I would need some inspiration from your experiences, if you don't mind thanks again for writting this Kelsea The_African_Son.

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Danny Draper 28 February 2012

This is certainly a complex situation of amazing loss and personal suffering and grief. Not much more I can say. A powerful emotional journey shared here.

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