I Missed You Comments

Beautiful love poem written with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharings, Shakira.

Wind was singing songs of mourning/Tired and weary horses were resting/The wings of black bats were flapping, When the world was such/I missed you so much.....I profusely admire the beauty of poetic expression! A fabulous poem...10

Nice 👌 sir

Miss / missing, here is the interest of life originates some emotions and experiences in life, .......... and finally if unity happens then comes heaven as you say, You come in my vision, I forget the pangs of separation....... excellently written, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++ 10

While I kept reading this poem, I saw myself as I was writing few years ago. A clear diction, great imagery and a very clean concept. I wish to read more poems and see you grow up into a fantastic poet.

Whenever I feel for you......... I forget pangs of separation although we have lost our love admit flapping of black bats. Nice feelings Sir. A huge 10++++++

A beautiful poem having fantastic expression. It is full of dreams and emotions. Thanks for shsring this....10

A beautiful expression. A longing, a craving so well expressed. The reader can definitely feel the intensity of your emotions.

i missed u, was it dream, emotion? but liked it. scores 10

Dreams of our loved and departed ones makes us forget the pangs of separation to a certain extent.. Enjoyed the word flow.Thanks for sharing

Such a beautiful dream. The horses and bats really did it for me.

I missed you - a beautiful poem- of pangs of separation - of love and emotion! Very well written with appropriate choice of words and metaphors. Enjoyed reading this profound poem, Shakil. Thank you.

This poem was really good...loved this to read...thank you :)

It is really good. T he way express and the words are touchable.

Absolutely beautiful, the rhythm is excellent. I have read so many poems from India and your poems stand out to the very best. 10.., .

Very nice poem. Well composed with beautiful imagery

Nice sir I loved it....when the world was such- nice line

When nature excited the lover with her charms, he found his beloved is missing, and when his lips were dry in waiting, tears closed his eyes, he found her kissing.

A poem wonderfully composed with rhyme, rhythm and music of its own. Its amazing images craftily woven into a musical symphony.

You have beautifully graced your words in your love longing. Enjoyed it. Thanks. Rate: 10.