Wednesday, September 24, 2008

I Missed It Comments

Rating: 5.0

Running jumping and dashing through the woods
over and under left to right
there is no escape it is growing near
what to do its almost here
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Adam Day
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Fay Slimm 25 September 2008

Such a movement and rhythmic flow to this piece Adam. So well done and had me reading with strict attention all the way to the end, which was a good punch line. A ten from me best wishes from Fay.

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