Thursday, July 17, 2008

I Miss You (To Honduras With Love V) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Almost as if in mourning
I typed these words
Quite not precisely like mourning
Yet there is a deep sense of loss
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Ayi Escalona
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Sheena Aguilar 11 December 2009

beautiful...............roamntic wowwwwwww

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Ezna Stephna 09 November 2009

Ariel this is a emotional poem of your loved one, who you no more see.......your words where expressed sure away that by read this poem its hurt and gives pain in heart..still i say do not lose hope, god's grace no one can pass by but we do our best. thanks for sharing this beautiful poem......10+10+10+.......

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 July 2008

love when so wishful by the remniscence, words still flow fretfully to whisper the love, yet lucid by texture, wellpenned, thanks for sharing

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Estrella Baldemosa 18 July 2008

A lovely poem for Miss Honduras, words are almost tangible, shaped and molded well...an art indeed! keep up the good work!

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M. E. 17 July 2008

Beautiful Ariel, but I believe that the words you mentioned will never stop of being sent for each other, until one of you succumb....death.

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