Wednesday, May 6, 2009

I Miss You So......(Lover's Lilt) Comments

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I haven’t seen you in so many days.
Oh please don’t say we part ways.

Want to feel an I miss you so much.
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Rehana Nazli 19 September 2009

I haven’t seen you in so many days. Oh please don’t say we part ways. Want to feel an I miss you so much. Eye to eye I ache your loving touch. Hey..thats what I call a romantic poem, sentimental and serene.

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Excellent rhyming …thanks Like a fresh air of hope to me.. Ten dr. sakti

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Dear Doctor, your heart beats seemed irregular at that time.wellbut yes wonderful feeling at that time.....10

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Aleksandra Lachut 29 May 2009

Very nice poem and it perfectly describes me and the feelings that I have for my best friend.

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Naidz Ladia 07 May 2009

rhyming words are nice to read....this is a nice expression on how you miss the one you loved..naizz

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Nasreen Dawood 06 May 2009

so pure is your love...what a beautiful poem...inshallah may your love return what you feel.

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Fawzia Zie 06 May 2009

wonderful feeling! even though the pain is unbearable!

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