I Miss You Dear........... Comments
I...............get only few hours a week to meet you
just..........for a while my eyes admire and adore you
want........ to be with you always
to............share my love and care
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wow..........great construction.........pleasing to the eyes n nice to read.........well penned
Oh God, Sebastine this is really good.....just expressive in itself in its real feel that exist within a true heart -filled with utmost tenderness.......the format or texture is simply great..presention of the beautiful thought is extremelly gud..now wht happen Sebastine the modlues are proving beautiful and angelic..quite romantic in nature.............Winnie 10+++++endless! ! ! .
wow... very impressive.. great love is speaking here....very poetic words are so alive....very Sebastine..lol your dual composition added spices to it...added more passion... all the lines are so enchanting, captivating, touching like the beauty of the moonlight that never rest... a great love revealed...a great longing exposed.... revelation of the feeling from deep within your heart....love can wait they said..and your reward is waiting...to have her....and spend your whole life with her..... and i would love to suggest... laminate this poem of your, give it to her....owssssss....smile 10++++so sweet....
my gosh...my gosh...my gosh.....i dont know how to start my comment ha...very impressive, , , , first, i like the dual interpretitions express here...the meaning of words written horizontally differs in written words vertically...what a very unique composition dear...unique in appearance and unique in thought, idea and meaning..this is an honest decleration, revelation from your honest heart, a very beautiful piece whch gives the author an idea about his peronality...for me, the author is displaying his sincerity, honesty., a loving, a kind hearted, etcetera etcetera....but naughtiness is well presented, hehehhehe where? in the form of the vertical words...very unique dear sweety tine, , , well, am expecting another one with diagonal style ha...am not kiddin but i found this poem hundred times nice, , , my gosh...allow me to share my warmth congratulations to this piece...i love this poem, , , i like this most....bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
Wow such a double composition, lateral and horizontal composition...uniquely penned with touching verses...Thanks 10+++
hmmm, this is soo sweeet, my dear.Your flow of words are just lovely. hugs, meggie
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7/29/2025 11:36:50 AM # 1.0.0
well written and constructed in a rhythmic way. I put 10++++ for your beautiful writing.