Sunday, April 21, 2013

I Miss You Dad Comments

Rating: 4.0

When you walked out our door
I dropped to the floor
Why couldn't you stay
I asked myself that day
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Kira Parson
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Sophia Engel 02 May 2013

That is a really soulful poem. You are one of those rare people who actually put their very soul into what they write. I hope to hear much more of you! Great work Kira

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..... W@king Up..... 24 April 2013

A sad poem :) but it was nice. It's funny how the little things count when they're not there.

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Sophia Engel 23 April 2013

Wow, that's really nice! ! ! ! I love it! !

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