I Miss You Comments

keep me under your wings so i could be closer to your heart let your lips close to mine so you co.............. desire any way to remain so closer..beautiful imagination with strong urge....10 read mine miss i miss u and anywhere...

lovely... so beautiful to think and feel... graciously written... fine-flowing.....I love thins... very passionate... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

powerful to read.......and beautiful to comment...... lady grace is always gracious in writing...

sweet and very inviting..

Two words... brief and beautiful... thanks for the invite regards Alf 10

I enjoyed reading all your work, lovely words, lovely choice, lovely everything. I'm like a little chick hidin' under the mother hen's wings away from a predator hovering above. And the mother hen is you my Lady. Thanks.

keep me under your wings and let me close to your heart Such nice words that make you fell the warmth

You let your heart out here we can feel it nice for the senses...... regards

You have created a very romantic mood by evoking our senses. Thank you for sharing this poem with me.

Good words, yet very short, and I am the type who likes it when words rhyme all the time. Also, the title made me think it was going to be a bit different. Nice job though.

Brief, yet heavey laden with real emotions of a yearning heart. Beautifully crafted.

keep me under your wings so i could be closer to your heart let your lips close to mine so you could smell the fragrance of my scent... let me love you always and be my love forever keep me under your wings and let me close to your heart... what a sweet missing way..in poetry form..it seems like you are talking from the core of your sweet heart..see feeling it..1010

so heartwarming, beautiful.......thanks for sharing 10

this is so beautiful

Compact yet communicates so much...excellent!

Sweet and short good work

passionate write lady but very tender

It smells of a burning desire to be Close; very tenderly written!

just as sweet as always yet longingness emerge tremedously!