I Miss You Poem by Rob Lamberton

I Miss You

Rating: 5.0

When the day is hot and long
When the desert cries it's song
When the night won't turn to day
When I have no more to play

When three words are all I know
When the plants refuse to grow
When the birds won't take to flight
When the day turns into night

When will it ever be again
When will I breath the air so thin
When will this thirst be ever quenched
When will the horse take to the cinch

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 April 2025

Bravo Rob It was a joy to read TFS

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Anjandev Roy 07 April 2025

Wonderful flow...... like it....

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Rebecca Navarre 08 April 2025

A beautiful poem from the heart on longing! ..

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Miss Grace 07 May 2025

Missing some one truly doesnt really search for circumstance, the poem really explains that beautifully

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M.J. Lemon 11 April 2025

Fantastic verse, Rob!

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Rob Lamberton 09 April 2025

Thank you for stopping by and adding such great comments!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2025

A beautiful poem adorned with lovely flow of poetic expressions and nice rhyme. Each and every stanza stands out showing how to desperately miss someone.

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Rebecca Navarre 08 April 2025

So beautifully composed and heart felt! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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