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I looked with blinding eyes at a white flower wilting
Then I remembered your name dying on my lips.

These tiny droplets of salty rain remind me I have been a dry land;
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Joshua Nnachi
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 August 2022

a wonderous poem Joshua

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Joshua Nnachi 21 August 2022

Thank you, Azzopardi

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Joshua Nnachi 21 August 2022

Thank you

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Nosheen Irfan 20 August 2022

A unique and heart touching style of writing. So good to read this gem of a poem.

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Joshua Nnachi 21 August 2022

Thank you, Nosheen

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Nabakishore Dashi 17 June 2022

Excellent idea in the poem dear joshua.

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Joshua Nnachi 07 August 2022

Thank you, Dashi

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"..all I can do/ is water it with tears"… beautiful, poignant and hear wrenching, but endearing poem. Poem of high aesthetic standards. Top

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Joshua Nnachi 07 August 2022

I appreciate

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