Thursday, September 19, 2013

I Miss You Comments

Rating: 4.5

Believe or not, does not matter to me
I am missing you which is very true,
Day and night every moment,
I am decaying without you.
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Amitava Sur
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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 July 2017

A saddest lament of ONE soul. Terribly sad poem, but well worded.

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Theodora Onken 12 March 2016

i could feel all of the pain encompassing your heart and soul. Great write.

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Sandra Feldman 23 March 2014

The emptiness that Missing brings is difficult to fill, It makes you pain and all in vain, And then it breaks your will! Very well expressed in this lovely, sweet and sad poem. Thank you for reading mine.

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Beach Girl 17 March 2014

Beautifully written poem, yet painful to read. Anyone who has ever lost a loved one can certainly relate the thoughts expressed in this poem.

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Heather Wilkins 28 September 2013

a lot of emotion in this poem. very touching write. love a two way street.

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Patricia Grantham 22 September 2013

So lovely your poem. The pain of losing a loved one is agonizing. Time will heal all of it eventually. It is better to love and lost than not to have loved at all. Good penning.

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Hazel Durham 20 September 2013

Sraight from your heart, with all the pain of losing your beloved so beautifully expressed!

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