Friday, April 1, 2016

I Miss You Comments

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Everything that looked hale
Is now very bad and unwell

The sun shows no energy
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JR Cuyam
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Bharati Nayak 02 April 2016

Love is like sun that illuminates our heart, uplift our spirit and give energy to body.When love withdraws it plunges us to darkness, sapping our energy and dwindling our spirit.A deep yearning and a call to the love to come back to life is nicely penned in this beautiful poem.Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

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Sonali Ganguly 01 April 2016

beautifully pen pictured the thoughts

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Abderrahmane Dakir 01 April 2016

Nice about the relationships in the best way. Thank you Jr.Cuyam for this wonderful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 April 2016

Restore our health we need an antidote And it's your presence Buds, I know this isn't cute...... i miss you very much. this idea u have developed in a wonderful poetic imaginative way. love this poem very much my dear poet. tony

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